Age/Gender: 24, Male
Location: Sweden
I am a swedish guy that loves to make music. i use FL Studio
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this track is really blurry and wierd.
you need a beat with hihats and stuff.
try and make something more melodic.
If i would give you a tip on how to make a trance song i would have to say, litsen to a trance song first... then try and copy. when you think you have gotten the hang of it, try and make your own melodies and beats.
i hope im making some sense here, because this track man... no offence... it sounds nothing like trance, niether does it sound like it have been put any effort into.
I wish you good luck in your future submissions.
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Author's Response:
thanks i wasnt really sure wat genre it was... XD so i just put trance
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i did not expect this. a nice melody and a cool beat.
Punk! yeah!
good job, keep it up!
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Author's Response:
cheers
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You dont have any memorable melody wich makes it hard to grab the feelings in this song.
nice beat and bass loop.
if you are to have more than one melody at the same time, try and make them sound diffrent... it gets kinda messy.
Anyway, i think you are gettting the hang of it. give it more time and try to work more with the FX such as reveerb, flanger and delay maybe.
good job
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Author's Response:
thanks again
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You have understood the part where you need a good melody, and this is pretty sweet.
but i cant really hear any bass. i think thats what's missing.
Author's Response:
yea true i guess i couldn't find a spot for bass in here but i look for the right sound of bass and see what i can do, thanks
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but wont give you full score because i dont rate this as Dance.
more like asskicking-badass-DnB!
still a Gr8 track!
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Author's Response:
Thanks
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This is f-ing hardcore!
Me like!
Cant write anymore... gotta check out your other stuff!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
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i just litsened to this piece because you are a fellow swede. hehe
its a cool flow in this song, and its really really angry.
sounds like a rant towards our life thats mearly is to work, buy stuff and watch TV =P
*thumbs up*
Tho i dont like this genre, i can tell that you have used some energy on this song.
^^
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That piece you gave me was awsome.
i didnt do it as good as you would have, but i think i did a good shot ^^
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Im absolutely amazed by the beginning, so much feelings just from the start, gotta keep litsening.
Yeah dude/dudes this is so damn awsome!
i have been watching "One piece" over 2 weeks now and this just makes me remember all of the previous episodes i've seen.
AAH! but i dont like the ending... i want it to be longer! hehe =P
DAMN Good work!
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Author's Response:
Thanks! =)
And don't worry about the ending, after about a year of not touching this song, I've decided to revisit it and add to it, as I stated in an earlier post. I'm glad you liked it.
-Luis
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Its really loud and is scratching my headphones.
but just litsening to the idea of the song is cool.
good work. ^^
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Author's Response:
Thanks for the good words. Sorry for the volume.
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